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            | 1. | Oct 1999 - from Tom Crochunis to Ellen Donkin: Ellen,Way back when, when you cannily dodged my petitions inviting you to participate
  in an email conversation for the women playwrights site, I promised I would get
  back to you another time. Guess what?
 I may have even suggested back then that I would be interested in writing to
  you and having an email conversation that would then be posted to the site about
  some of the kinds of performance explorations that you "wish someone would take on"what texts, which authors, what approach to rehearsal, what styles of production,
  etc.and you would speculate without any responsibility to do anything about your
  grandiose visions other than explain what planet they are coming from.
 So, how does that sound? Can I persuade you this time?
 I hope you are well and look forward to hearing from you.
 Best,
 Tom
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            | 2. | Tue, 19 Oct 1999 - from Ellen Donkin to Tom Crochunis: Tom: I would be happy to help out this time. My students and I did some work
                      last spring looking at a video of that production of Burney's Witlings that I told you about, and part of what you realize is that the play, for all
                      its brilliant ideas, is unfinished, overweight. Needed production.
                      Anyway, I'll look over your email carefully this week and
                      get back to you on Friday with some thoughts, and maybe you
                      can tell me how the thing proceeds, if we respond to one
                      another, and if so, who leads off. Thanks so much for being
                so patient. Elly |  
            | 3. | Tue, 19 Oct 1999 - from Tom Crochunis to Ellen Donkin: Elly,I think that a process and pace that should work for our conversation is that
  you can write each Friday for the next 3-4 weeks and I'll respond sometime early
  the next week. You can just sketch out some ideas about production explorations
  you'd like to see and your thinking for choosing them and I'll ask whatever comes
  into my pretty little head. For instance, I'm interested by what it is that gave
  you the sense that the play was "unfinished, overweight." How did students react to it-either in print or on video? How did you interpret
  their response? What does any of this-the production, the student response to
  the video-say about theatre history and how it intersects with contemporary ways
  of encountering dramatic texts?
 Tom
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            | 4. | Mon, 25 Oct 1999 - from Ellen Donkin to Tom Crochunis: Tom: Some points that came up for us, and some answers to your questions: We saw about
  40 minutes worth of videotaped production (this is the one I told you about that
  was directed by Kaaren Johnston at College of St. Benedict in St. Joseph, Minnesota.)
  We had also read the play, discussed it in detail, and done our own readings
  of the play in class. But additionally, we had just finished working on The Clandestine Marriage (a Garrick and Colman the Elder collaboration), and read The Rover, so there was some sense of a context emerging, especially with The Clandestine Marriage, in terms of how female characters get situated in dramatic texts.
 The shift from Clandestine Marriage to Witlings was startling. The female characters in CM were either young, gentle, helpless (in this case pregnant), well-born and beautiful,
  or they were older, post-menopausal harridans tolerated only because they wielded
  tremendous financial power and could make themselves obnoxious. In Witlings, the play opens in a milliners' shop, and there is some sense right away that
  the gravitational center of the play is in this shop, and is connected to women
  who make their own living and have opinions about things which they share with
  each other. The outside world intrudes all the time, in the form of customers,
  footmen, etc, but the play seemed to us to be worked around a collective protagonist,
  a group of working class women. Burney establishes a point of view when Censor
  and Dabbler come struggling into the shop and Censor says "Will you raise a fortification of caps? or barricade me with furbelows? Will
  you fire at me a broadside of pompons? or will you stop my retreat with a fan?" and one of the milliners, Miss Jenny, mutters: "Dear, how odd the gentleman talks!" Which seems to frame that whole other plot with Cecilia, Beaufort, Codger and
  Dabbler, with a kind of ironic distance before it even gets established.
 So to answer your question: It was our sense that the play establishes this wonderful
  alternative to the traditional plot (in which the woman is seen as barter [CM] in a financial chess game), by placing the opening scene in the hands of these
  women, and furthermore placing the second traditional romantic plot in an ironic
  context. But then the script seemed to back off a little from its initial brave
  commitments. The romantic plot took up an increasing amount of space, and the
  working women in the millinery shop seemed to get called forth mainly as support
  for that romantic plot, rather than having a developed plot of their own. But
  by that time, our commitment had been made to this first group of women, and
  we kept hoping for a fuller and more autonomous development of plot for them.
  Maybe that's what the sense of "overweight, and unfinished" came from. I'll keep thinking about it. E.
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            | 5. | Wed, 27 Oct 1999 - from Tom Crochunis to Ellen Donkin: E.Here are some further questions and thoughts. Let me know what you think:
 
                      ED wrote: Some points that came up for us, and some answers to your questions:
                            We saw about 40 minutes worth of videotaped production
                            (this is the one I told you about that was directed by
                            Kaaren Johnston at College of St. Benedict.) We had also
                            read the play, discussed it in detail, and done our own
                            readings of the play in class. But additionally, we had
                        just finished working on The Clandestine Marriage (a Garrick and Colman the Elder collaboration), and read The Rover, so there was some sense of a context emerging, especially with The Clandestine Marriage, in terms of how female characters get situated in dramatic texts.  How would you describe the interaction between viewing, reading, and enacting?
                        Did they counterpoint or complement each other? What happens
                      when contemporary bodies encounter the world of the play?  
                    ED wrote: But additionally, we had just finished working on The Clandestine Marriage (a Garrick and Colman the Elder collaboration), and read The Rover, so there was some sense of a context emerging, especially with The Clandestine Marriage, in terms of how female characters get situated in dramatic texts. The shift from Clandestine Marriage to Witlings was startling. The female characters in CM were either young, gentle, helpless (in this case pregnant), well-born and beautiful,
        or they were older, post-menopausal harridans tolerated only because they wielded
        tremendous financial power and could make themselves obnoxious. In Witlings, the play opens in the Milliners shop, and there is some sense right away that
        the gravitational center of the play is in this shop, and is connected to women
        who make their own living and have opinions about things which they share with
        each other. The outside world intrudes all the time, in the form of customers,
        footmen, etc, but the play seemed to us to be worked around a collective protagonist,
        a group of working class women. Burney establishes a point of view when Censor
        and Dabbler come struggling into the shop and Censor says "Will you raise a fortification of caps? or barricade me with furbelows? Will
        you fire at me a broadside of pompons? or will you stop my retreat with a fan?" and one of the milliners, Miss Jenny, mutters: "Dear, how odd the gentleman talks!" Which seems to frame that whole other plot with Cecilia, Beaufort, Codger and
        Dabbler, with a kind of ironic distance before it even gets established.
 The way you say this reminds me a bit of Taming of the Shrew with its frame.... 
                      ED wrote: So to answer your question, it was our sense that the play establishes
                                this wonderful alternative to the traditional plot (in
                                which the woman is seen as barter (CM) in a financial chess game), by placing the opening scene in the hands of these
                                women, and furthermore placing the second traditional romantic
                                plot in an ironic context. But then the script seemed to
                                back off a little from its initial brave commitments. The
                                romantic plot took up an increasing amount of space, and
                                the working women in the millinery shop seemed to get called
                                forth mainly as support for that romantic plot, rather
                                than having a developed plot of their own. But by that
                                time, our commitment had been made to this first group
                                of women, and we kept hoping for a fuller and more autonomous
                                development of plot for them. Maybe that's what the sense
                        of "overweight, and unfinished" came from. I'll keep thinking about it. E. Your description of the play's sequence raises interesting questions about how
                            emphasis works in the chronology of a staging. I wonder,
                            for example, whether/how the original frame of the play gets
                            reactivated later after it's moved into the background. Do
                            reading and staging reveal the play differently in this case?
                            Is the flavor of the opening more enduring when staged than
                            when read?Okay, back to you?
 Tom
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            | 6. | Sat, 30 Oct 1999 - from Ellen Donkin to Tom Crochunis: Tom: I got your questionsI'm chewing on them and I'll be back to you, hopefully tomorrow (Sunday, Halloweenthe high holidays around here). I realized as I reread my stuff how much I love
                      this play and how anxious it makes me to criticize it publiclyI hope it doesn't get read as a dismissal. I can't complain about what she wrote
                      without feeling protective of it in equal measures. Oh, that
                Frances... El |  
            | 7. | Fri, 14 Jan 2000 - from Ellen Donkin to Tom Crochunis: Tom: I've just gone back to my tape of the production.I'm thinking through your questions, and what I take you to mean here is how
  production (contemporary theatre production, contemporary theatre production
  archivally recorded on video, contemporary staged reading, and staged reading
  in the 18th century) might have importance for reception. I remembered as I reread
  your questions how the play got read out loud by Frances' family after dinner
  one night, and there was a kind of momentum and hilarity that come undoubtedly
  with recognition and privacy (in other words, they knew these characterizations
  to be satires of people whom Doody identifies as patrons of Frances's father,
  the musicologist Dr. Charles Burney). So part of the pleasure perhaps, in this
  first reading, was that it was a venue for covert satire of people they would
  all have been duty-bound to treat with the utmost formality and respect. Not
  to mention the fact that it was a family gathering, with whatever complicated
  networks of support or critique that might have entailed for Frances. Sometimes
  your family is your most candid critic, although it would probably be fair to say
  that none of them, even Charles Burney himself who had written music for the
  London theatre, were "expert" on how seaworthy this play would be in the context of full production. Here
  Sheridan, Garrick and Colman were excellent judges on just how long a scene could
  be sustained, where a character needed another scene in order to fully justify
  a later plot development, how to shift narrative language into dramatic dialogue,
  etc.
 Now, if I shift gears a moment over to the St. Benedict production, which was
  1996, a couple of things come into focus as interesting points of comparison.
  First of all, we have no 18th century baseline for production. Nobody produced
  this play in its own era; it got shelved at Dr. Burney's panicked request. So
  to the extent that any play during this period would have gotten read and revised
  by the current manager before getting submitted first to the censor and then
  to the cast for rehearsal, this one didn't. Consequently we have no fingerprints
  on the play other than Frances Burney's that might give us some clues about how
  they might have read this play with 18th century production in mind. And as we
  know, often a new play went all the way through opening night, and got revised
  again that first week, based on audience response, and where it became clear
  there were places where their attention went slack or they laughed inappropriately.
  Without a doubt, any critique of this script by us is hampered by the fact that a contemporary sensibility, mine or my students, or for that matter the
  producers and designers and director of the St.Benedict production, is shaped
  by whatever constitutes pace and aesthetic response in the 1990's-2000's. That
  inevitably brings film and television into play, and all the ways in which attention
  gets manipulated in those media. The situation is made even more complex by the
  fact that the archival tape of the staged version at St. Benedict is now seen
  by us on a video monitor; rightly or wrongly, that monitor invokes expectations
  connected to television. And as I said before, we are making judgements about
  a script that is terra incognita anyway because of never having been professionally
  produced in its own period. So our magisterial judgements about the script being "unfinished, overweight" have to be pretty scrupulously contextualized.
 Another layer of complexity: the St. Benedict production made an interesting
  design choice, which was to use period costumes and wigs, but to stage the play
  in front of several large painted units that created a visual counterpoint to
  the action by invoking Burney's biography, her contemporaries, and her family
  with greatly enlarged images that looked to be painted on free-standing flats.
  There were also wings with enlarged 18th century writing on them, and some step
  units that were definitely not period, along with a circular center stage which
  may have been a revolve. The costumes and wigs in particular, as I am remembering
  my talks with the director, had been painstakingly researched, especially in
  view of the fact that the play was about milliners to begin with. The deliberate
  disparity between set and costumes may have been intended to create a critical
  distance in the audience, which may have contributed to how we entered into a
  critique of the play as a group.
 But we read it aloud, among ourselves, before seeing it on video and so our response
  to the script came from this sequence: reading it alone (albeit in the context
  of other period plays by men and women); reading it as a staged reading to one
  another, and seeing it on the video screen. My guess is that because the course
  had made a case for female subjectivity as being one of the ways we recognized
  a play written by a woman (even if the main characters were men in order to meet
  perceived market demand) that Burney's script in the first act set into motion
  certain expectations and hopes that ultimately were not met. The subjectivity
  that is awarded to the working women milliners at the beginning of the play simply
  doesn't develop. This may be Burney's own effort to meet market demand by investing
  herself in the romantic plot after setting up this initial scenario with working
  women, and certainly she revisits it later in the play (beginning of Act V).
  But I suspect we had our hopes pinned on having the sensibilities and humor and resilience of these working women come more fully into focus,
  and in fact they move into the background once the romantic plot picks up steam.
  That was the substance for the charge of "unfinished;" I think it had to do with our expectations based on the opening scene.
 The charge of "overweight" was a growing sense, as we read the play out loud, that she had grafted two
  different genres together, one the genre that she had inherited which included
  the romantic plot, and the other the genre that she reinvented to suit her own
  needs (what to call it? working class situation, comic, a sense of a collective
  protagonist more than a single person). These two genres, if we can call them
  that, collide at the beginning of Act V when Cecilia, a refugee from the romantic
  plot, comes into the millinery shop looking woebegone and pathetic because her
  romance (and her aspirations to wealth and security) are collapsing; and she
  stands in stark contrast to these women who are working and taking care of themselves.
  But our concern was that these working women hadn't been developed enough to
  keep a firm grip on the gravitational center of the play. So we see the contrast
  without being able to fully make a moral judgement about what the contrast means,
  if you see what I mean. Maybe as I think about it, what we were complaining about was that the romantic plot was overweight, and that we would
  have preferred to see it as the counterpoint. Instead, the milliners became the
  counterpoint, and the romantic couple became the gravitational center.
 The St. Benedict production made a very interesting decision to use the assembled
  voices of the cast to chorally "narrate" the play in certain moments, and soonce again, in addition to design choices,
  the production gave us a way to look at the play from the outside, and made room
  for our own (sometimes critical) contemporary sensibilities. A production in
  which all aspects moved in the direction of authenticity (i.e. "authentic" reproduction) probably would not have made room for our critical reaction to
  the script in quite the same way. We were, from the outset, determined to champion
  Frances Burney's play, especially given the odds she was contending with (her
  father and Samuel Crisp) and the fact that it had been solicited by Sheridan
  and then never gotten produced. We also knew something of her life, as a novelist
  and a playwright, and also as a woman. Our sense of expectation was very high.
  It was in the context of this kind of entry into her world that we read the play
  and realized, with a certain shock, that she was a young woman in her twenties
  with no first-hand experience of theatre at all. Given the smallest amount of
  encouragement, and our experience of this first script (which in places is just
  breathtakingly funny and stageworthy) we felt she could have accomplished anything.
  But that the Witlings was a brilliant first effort that would have benefitted
  from production.
 Or maybe not.... It perhaps could be equally argued that major revisions (especially from
  someone like Thomas Harris) could have materially injured (i.e., neutralized)
  the originality of the play, and that what we have in the surviving script is
  like petrified wood. We see all the layers before someone got in and turned them
  into chipboard. I had never thought of this before; that in fact, by escaping
  production this script of hers gives us a very important window into how innovative
  she might have been under other circumstances.
 I'm going to reread the script and look again at my original message to you and
  see if I buy my own arguments! Take care, Elly
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            | 8. | Fri, 21 Jan 2000 - from Tom Crochunis to  Ellen Donkin: Elly, 
                      ED wrote: I'm thinking through your questions, and what I take you to mean here
                            is how production (contemporary theatre production, contemporary
                            theatre production archivally recorded on video, contemporary
                            staged reading, and staged reading in the 18th century)
                            might have importance for reception. I remembered as I
                            reread your questions how the play got read out loud by
                            Frances' family after dinner one night, and there was a
                            kind of momentum and hilarity that come undoubtedly with
                            recognition and privacy (in other words, they knew these
                            characterizations to be satires of people whom Doody identifies
                            as patrons of Frances's father, the musicologist Dr. Charles
                            Burney). So part of the pleasure perhaps, in this first
                            reading, was that it was a venue for covert satire of people they would all have been duty-bound to treat with the
                            utmost formality and respect. Not to mention the fact that
                            it was a family gathering, with whatever complicated networks
                            of support or critique that might have entailed for Frances.
                            Sometimes your family is your most candid critic, although
                            it would probably be fair to say that none of them, even
                            Charles Burney himself who had written music for the London
                            theatre, were "expert" on how seaworthy this play would be in the context of full production. Here
                            Sheridan, Garrick and Colman were excellent judges on just
                            how long a scene could be sustained, where a character
                            needed another scene in order to fully justify a later
                            plot development, how to shift narrative language into
                        dramatic dialogue, etc.  The story about the reception history of Burney's play is wonderful. It seems
                        so important as a salient piece of evidence about the play's
                        complex "performability" and also raises all kinds of questions about what we even mean by such a term.
                        Maybe we should always look at various different kinds of "performance" of a play alongside one anotherreviews of the published text, theatre reviews, responses to the play within
                        the theatre company or the family of the author. If we did
                        so, there might be less of the bottom line assumptions about
                      what constitutes "performability."  
                      ED wrote: Now, if I shift gears a moment over to the St. Benedict production,
                              which was 1996, a couple of things come into focus as interesting
                              points of comparison. First of all, we have no 18th century
                              baseline for production. Nobody produced this play in its
                              own era; it got shelved at Dr. Burney's panicked request.
                              So to the extent that any play during this period would
                              have gotten read and revised by the current manager before
                              getting submitted first to the censor and then to the cast
                              for rehearsal, this one didn't. Consequently we have no
                              fingerprints on the play other than Frances Burney's that
                              might give us some clues about how they might have read
                              this play with 18th century production in mind. And as
                              we know, often a new play went all the way through opening night, and got revised again that first week, based on audience
                              response, and where it became clear there were places where
                              their attention went slack or they laughed inappropriately.
                              Without a doubt, any critique of this script by us is hampered
                              by the fact that a contemporary sensibility, mine or my
                              students, or for that matter the producers and designers
                              and director of the St.Benedict production, is shaped by
                              whatever constitutes pace and aesthetic response in the
                              1990's-2000's. That inevitably brings film and television
                              into play, and all the ways in which attention gets manipulated
                              in those media. The situation is made even more complex
                              by the fact that the archival tape of the staged version
                              at St. Benedict is now seen by us on a video monitor; rightly or wrongly, that monitor invokes expectations connected
                              to television. And as I said before, we are making judgements
                              about a script that is terra incognita anyway because of
                              never having been professionally produced in its own period.
                        So our magisterial judgements about the script being "unfinished, overweight" have to be pretty scrupulously contextualized.  I think the significance of what you're pointing to here is often missed. I mean,
                          people could not help but agree with you, I suspect, since
                          how can we argue with the cultural specificity of our frames
                          of reference, particularly when it comes to plays that are
                          being looked at seriouslyperhaps for the first timethrough these frames. But I think that the implications of what you're pointing
                          to are really potentially earth-shattering for historiographic
                          work and for discussions of how we decide what to teach,
                          what pedagogies to employ, and what performanceespecially in an educational settingis for. I mean, if we consider your point seriously, then the very purposes of teaching
      dramatic writing in the context of the literature or theatre classroom would
      need to become much more self-reflexive. So, rather than asking what plays matter
      (given the degree to which all manner of cultural bias and social constraint
      must be swallowed and replicated to even begin to answer that question the way
      curriculum typically does), we might need to be willing to engage in much more
      self-conscious pedagogical performances and text selections, choosing to look
      at a play like Burney's in relation to the frames of reference you mention, asking
      how the media structures we have internalized lead us to read the play, where
      those structures connect to social and cultural frames of reference that may
      or may not have actually influenced (through a complex chain of lineage) how
      Burney's play was both constructed (in the absence of actual production rewriting)
      and received in its own time. I mean, when you read Baillie's critical discourses as in some ways aware of the cinematic in the theatre of her time, you
      have a justification for seeing Burney's dramaturgy in relation to our own contemporary
      cinematic structures of response. Anyway, I'm going on, but I think that you
      have really opened a wonderful can of worms here through how you speculate about
      what influenced the way Burney's play looked now.
 If you were to ask students to do something exploratory to try to experience
      these frames of reference, how might you get them to see themselves seeing the
      play? What if they created story boards of certain sections to force the play
      into cinematic structures? Is there a way you might use performance work to bring
      them in touch with the constraints placed on them by their ways of reading the
      play through contemporary lenses?
 
                    ED wrote: Another layer of complexity: the St. Benedict production made an interesting
                                design choice, which was to use period costumes and wigs,
                                but to stage the play in front of several large painted
                                units that created a visual counterpoint to the action
                                by invoking Burney's biography, her contemporaries, and
                                her family with greatly enlarged images that looked to
                                be painted on free-standing flats. There were also wings
                                with enlarged 18th century writing on them, and some step
                                units that were definitely not period, along with a circular
                                center stage which may have been a revolve. The costumes
                                and wigs in particular, as I am remembering my talks with
                                the director, had been painstakingly researched, especially
                                in view of the fact that the play was about milliners to begin with. The deliberate disparity between set and costumes
                                may have been intended to create a critical distance in
                                the audience, which may have contributed to how we entered
                                into a critique of the play as a group.But we read it aloud, among ourselves, before seeing it on video and so our response
          to the script came from this sequence: reading it alone (albeit in the context
          of other period plays by men and women); reading it as a staged reading to one
          another, and seeing it on the video screen. My guess is that because the course
          had made a case for female subjectivity as being one of the ways we recognized
          a play written by a woman (even if the main characters were men in order to meet
          perceived market demand) that Burney's script in the first act set into motion
          certain expectations and hopes that ultimately were not met. The subjectivity
          that is awarded to the working women milliners at the beginning of the play simply
          doesn't develop. This may be Burney's own effort to meet market demand by investing
          herself in the romantic plot after setting up this initial scenario with working
          women, and certainly she revisits it later in the play (beginning of Act V).
          But I suspect we had our hopes pinned on having the sensibilities and humor and resilience of these working women come more fully into focus,
          and in fact they move into the background once the romantic plot picks up steam.
          That was the substance for the charge of "unfinished;" I think it had to do with our expectations based on the opening scene.
 You point to ways that pedagogy itself provides another crucial framing lens
                            that deserves to be reflected upon as a contemporary way
                            of seeing the play. What I'm really struck by here, too,
                            is that we might be able to say that our expectation of the
                            kind of "subjectivity" you mention is conditioned by the greater familiarity to contemporary readers
                            of genres other than drama (the novel, Romantic poetry, film?)
                            or of a dramatic style that itself addressed a cultural audience
                            accustomed to the subjectivities of these other genres. This
                            possibility seems particularly weird because, of course,
                            Burney herself is best known as a novelist who had something
                            to do with this history. All this is to say that our frames
                            of reference are historically related to the storytelling
                            strategies in relation to which Burney was writing. So, what's my question? Well, how would talking about novels and their ways of
        engaging us influence how students might be asked to reflect on their responses
        to Burney's play? Or, alternatively, how might Romantic poetry's frames of reference
        (and here I mean either the poetry of Hemans or Wordsworth) be juxtaposed with
        what the play both does and doesn't do?
 
                      ED wrote: The St. Benedict production made a very interesting decision to use
                                  the assembled voices of the cast to chorally "narrate" the play in certain moments, and so once again, in addition to design choices,
                                  the production gave us a way to look at the play from the
                                  outside, and made room for our own (sometimes critical)
                                  contemporary sensibilities. A production in which all aspects
                                  moved in the direction of authenticity (i.e. "authentic" reproduction) probably would not have made room for our critical reaction to
                        the script in quite the same way.  This last statement is very, very interesting. Could you say a little more about
                              this and how you think this strategy of "'authentic' reproduction" might affect contemporary response? Is there a parallel in critical response
                              and its inhibition by certain strategies of historiography?
                              Is there a case to be made for a deliberately inauthentic
                              or performative historiography? Is that something that has
                              been articulated well by anyone to your knowledge? (Sorry,
                      this is a huge topic I'm throwing at you....) 
                    ED wrote: We were, from the outset, determined to champion Frances Burney's play,
                                    especially given the odds she was contending with (her
                                    father and Samuel Crisp) and the fact that it had been
                                    solicited by Sheridan and then never gotten produced. We
                                    also knew something of her life, as a novelist and a playwright,
                                    and also as a woman. Our sense of expectation was very
                                    high. It was in the context of this kind of entry into
                                    her world that we read the play and realized, with a certain
                                    shock, that she was a young woman in her twenties with
                                    no first-hand experience of theatre at all. Given the smallest
                                    amount of encouragement, and our experience of this first
                                    script (which in places is just breathtakingly funny and
                                    stageworthy) we felt she could have accomplished anything. But that the Witlings was a brilliant first effort that would
                                    have benefitted from production. Or maybe not.... It perhaps could be equally argued that major revisions (especially from
              someone like Thomas Harris) could have materially injured (i.e., neutralized)
              the originality of the play, and that what we have in the surviving script is
              like petrified wood. We see all the layers before someone got in and turned them
              into chipboard. I had never thought of this before; that in fact, by escaping
              production this script of hers gives us a very important window into how innovative
              she might have been under other circumstances.
 And so, our slightly querulous response to a woman writer's play might signal
                                our registering the ways in which she was not incorporated
                                into traditions we have internalized. Or, put another way,
                                a writer's unhomogenized aesthetic tastes funny to us. Closet drama (broadly conceived to include anything that wasn't staged in the
            public theatres), then, provides a crucial countertext to the performance tradition,
            not just for what might only have been expressed there but also as the double of the traditions of stage dramaturgy.
 If this is so, then plays that were never adapted to the rigors of stage success
            constitute evidence of counter-aesthetics (either idiosyncratically individual
            or deliberately oppositional... on some continuum between these) and might provide
            crucial evidence, by contrast, with the dramaturgies we have learned to value
            in school.
 Is there a case to be made for these "marginal" texts as one of the best avenues for access to both the structures and practices
            of "the dramatic tradition" as well as to the responses to that tradition that have emerged from particular
            writers in particular contexts? It sounds to me like maybe the answer is yes
            and that the study of Sheridan or Inchbald is really best undertaken alongside
            a study of Burney's unperformed plays.
 As you can see, I really got excited by some of the things you wrote about. Feel
            free to take or leave whatever leads interest you.
 Best,
 Tom
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            | 9. | Fri, 4 Feb 2000 - from Ellen Donkin to Tom Crochunis: 
                      TC wrote: The story about the reception history of Burney's play is wonderful.
                        It seems so important as a salient piece of evidence about
                        the play's complex "performability" and also raises all kinds of questions about what we even mean by such a term.
                        Maybe we should always look at various different kinds
                        of "performance" of a play alongside one anotherreviews of the published text, theatre reviews, responses to the play within
                        the theatre company or the family of the author. If we
                        did so, there might be less of the bottom line assumptions
                        about what constitutes "performability."  Just a thought in response to your comments here. The work with Tracy [Davis]
                      on the nineteenth-century women playwrights [volume of essays]
                      had exactly that effect on me, i.e. I came away with fewer "bottom-line assumptions about what constituted performability." It's an important reminder for me too, because I often cite Garrick and Colman
                      (et al) as authorities on the subject of performability,
                      which indeed they were, but only for those professional theatres
                      and those audiences. Your idea of "comparative studies" of performability opens up the possibility of legitimizing other venues, something
                      that probably has to happen if women playwrights in history
                      are going to come into focus anyway. 
                  TC wrote: I think the significance of what you're pointing to here is often missed.
                            I mean, people could not help but agree with you, I suspect,
                            since how can we argue with the cultural specificity of
                            our frames of reference, particularly when it comes to
                            plays that are being looked at seriouslyperhaps for the first timethrough these frames. But I think that the implications of what you're pointing
                            to are really potentially earth-shattering for historiographic
                            work and for discussions of how we decide what to teach,
                            what pedagogies to employ, and what performanceespecially in an educational settingis for. I mean, if we consider your point seriously, then the very purposes of teaching
      dramatic writing in the context of the literature or theatre classroom would
      need to become much more self-reflexive. So, rather than asking what plays matter
      (given the degree to which all manner of cultural bias and social constraint
      must be swallowed and replicated to even begin to answer that question the way
      curriculum typically does), we might need to be willing to engage in much more
      self-conscious pedagogical performances and text selections, choosing to look
      at a play like Burney's in relation to the frames of reference you mention, asking
      how the media structures we have internalized lead us to read the play, where
      those structures connect to social and cultural frames of reference that may
      or may not have actually influenced (through a complex chain of lineage) how
      Burney's play was both constructed (in the absence of actual production rewriting)
      and received in its own time. I mean, when you read Baillie's critical discourses as in some ways aware of the cinematic in the theatre of her time, you
      have a justification for seeing Burney's dramaturgy in relation to our own contemporary
      cinematic structures of response. Anyway, I'm going on, but I think that you
      have really opened a wonderful can of worms here through how you speculate about
      what influenced the way Burney's play looked now.
 If you were to ask students to do something exploratory to try to experience
      these frames of reference, how might you get them to see themselves seeing the
      play? What if they created story boards of certain sections to force the play
      into cinematic structures? Is there a way you might use performance work to bring
      them in touch with the constraints placed on them by their ways of reading the
      play through contemporary lenses?
 It has honestly never occurred to me to plow into a self-reflexive enterprise
                        of this kind. Like so many of us, I've always covertly imagined
                        that studying theatre was in some sense competitive with
                        studying the media. Or at least was deliberately marking
                        itself as "other territory." What you suggest here, by implication, is that theatre in their context and
                        maybe even in our own is the media, and could even be argued to be mass media, given the number of performances
                        vs. the number of citizens in London in a given year. This
                        makes me think that weaving these two together more consciously
                        serves both areas of study better. I always pass out a xeroxed
                        copy of the Morning Chronicle, March something, 1779, and
                        ask the students to tell me what they notice. It's stunning
                        for them and for me to discover, again and again, that when
                        Frances Burney was writing her very first plays, theatre
                        listings were on the front page of the morning paper. I can't get over it. Doesn't that say something about
                        how we might reposition theatre in our courses, not as a
                        kind of fossil fuel, but as something that participates and
                        indeed is subject to the aesthetic judgements that have developed
                      as a consequence of other activities, like mass media? 
                    TC wrote: You point to ways that pedagogy itself provides another crucial framing
                              lens that deserves to You point to ways that pedagogy itself
                              provides another crucial framing lens that deserves to
                              be reflected upon as a contemporary way of seeing the play.
                              What I'm really struck by here, too, is that we might be
                              able to say that our expectation of the kind of "subjectivity" you mention is conditioned by the greater familiarity to contemporary readers
                              of genres other than drama (the novel, Romantic poetry,
                              film?) or of a dramatic style that itself addressed a cultural
                              audience accustomed to the subjectivities of these other
                              genres. This possibility seems particularly weird because,
                              of course, Burney herself is best known as a novelist who
                              had something to do with this history. All this is to say
                              that our frames of reference are historically related to
                              the storytelling strategies in relation to which Burney
                              was writing. So, what's my question? Well, how would talking about novels and their ways of
        engaging us influence how students might be asked to reflect on their responses
        to Burney's play? Or, alternatively, how might Romantic poetry's frames of reference
        (and here I mean either the poetry of Hemans or Wordsworth) be juxtaposed with
        what the play both does and doesn't do?
 I take your question here to be how an eighteenth or nineteenth reader/auditor
                          would themselves have been conditioned by exposure in other
                          genres. And that we might condition our students by systematically
                          exposing them to what else people were reading, talking about,
                          seeing during the decade, so that they (the students) begin
                          to take in the play with the same kind of conditioning a
                          reader or audience member might have had during the period
                          itself. It seems to me absolutely true that we tend as a
                          whole to teach genres separate from one another, when in
                          fact they were not experienced separately from one another,
                          not by the public during the period, and not by the author/playwrights
                          themselves, whoas you point out about Burneywere themselves moving back and forth in whatever genre would have them at a
                          given moment. We probably teach to our own strengthslean in the direction of whichever genre we have been trained inrather than biting off a more interdisciplinary range of writings and performance
                          experiences in order to catch a fuller sense not only of
                          what a given play was about, but also how that play would
                          have been received. I'm thinking as I write about what a course like that might include; it would
      also need attention to history itself, and to the way history emerges in those
      newspapers (the reports from Parliament are one kind of information, but the
      small articles and advertisements are marvelously revealing of who was starving
      to death, what was getting imported from Africa, the cost of dance classes, etc.)
      And wouldn't the reading of novels sharpen our sense of how the gender debates
      were developing in other forms? The idea is to become a better "reader" of theatre scripts, rather than dragging our 21st century assumptions with us about what constitutes good theatre backwards into
      the eighteenth century. But by extension, we also raise the question here about
      how 18th century theatre got judged in an eighteenth century context. And presumably
      that means not only absorbing critical essays from the period, but figuring out
      how, at a more subliminal level, playwrights and theatre-goers were bringing
      with them expectations from other genres that they themselves were not conscious
      of.
 
                      TC wrote: This last statement is very, very interesting. Could you say a little
                                more about this and how you think this strategy of "'authentic' reproduction" might affect contemporary response? Is there a parallel in critical rmsponse
                                and its inhibition by certain strategies of historiography?
                                Is there a case to be made for a deliberately inauthentic
                                or performative historiography? Is that something that
                                has been articulated well by anyone to your knowledge?
                        (Sorry, this is a huge topic I'm throwing at you....)  I think performance studies is increasingly becoming interested in working with
                            historical materials from earlier centuries. I'm just reflecting
                            what I've heard at conferences and through the grapevine;
                            there may very well be something in print. A deliberately
                            inauthentic performance (the word makes me nervous, but maybe "historical reproduction" would be more accurate?) would seem to invite our participation and our commentary,
                            rather than our respectful witnessing of a cultural artifact.
                            The problem, I think, is that the object all sublime, at
                            least for me, is to experience recognition in these theatrical
                            moments, rather than estrangement and distance. Somehow the
                            strategies for creating deliberate inauthenticity have to
                            be managed with great care, so that we don't lose our sense
                            of connection to character. If that can be maintained, then
                            as an audience, we attach ourselves to the texture and vitality
                            of familiar character ground and because of the security
                            of that grounding, are able to enter into a much fuller sense
                            of the character's world (which, as a scholar of Greek history
                            and literature once said to me, is nothing but strangewhether you are talking about press gangs in the eighteenth or gladiators during
                            the Roman empire). It may be that the gaps are so huge, from
                            epoch to epoch, that we cannot "reproduce" an earlier epoch without leaving room somewhere in the production design for
                            a contemporary sensibility (20th or 21st century) to root itself. The alternative is the kind of production that attempts
                            to naturalize everything and runs the risk of camp. The issue
                            for me is how we locate ourselves and our audiences inside
                            historical texts. The text itself only had its own contemporary
                            audience in mind; we bring different baggage to the experience. The more I think about it, the more I wonder if our pleasure and investment as
        a class in the Witlings wasn't a function of everything else we had read and discussed prior to that
        play (it came late in the course). It was as if we had worked to acclimate ourselves
        to the world in which the play was written. But that's almost never a possibility
        for people who are simply filing into a theatre after a long day's work (a day
        replete with cell phones, computers and cars) and have to find some way to either
        enter into the world of the play, or let it slip by them entirely. To the extent
        that audiences are able to locate themselves in that world, and have the confidence
        to name certain aspects of that world as strange and others as familiar, would
        seem to me to be no small achievement. Maybe that's what you mean by performative
        historiography: there's an enactment which is itself a lesson in how to read
        history, in how we take it in, and why it's important (because it's us).
 
                    TC wrote: And so, our slightly querulous response to a woman writer's play might
                                    signal our registering the ways in which she was not
                                    incorporated into traditions we have internalized. Or,
                                    put another way, a writer's unhomogenized aesthetic tastes
                                    funny to us. Closet drama (broadly conceived to include anything that wasn't staged in the
            public theatres), then, provides a crucial countertext to the performance tradition,
            not just for what might only have been expressed there but also as the double of the traditions of stage dramaturgy.
 If this is so, then plays that were never adapted to the rigors of stage success
            constitute evidence of counter-aesthetics (either idiosyncratically individual
            or deliberately oppositional... on some continuum between these) and might provide
            crucial evidence, by contrast, with the dramaturgies we have learned to value
            in school.
 Is there a case to be made for these "marginal" texts as one of the best avenues for access to both the structures and practices
            of "the dramatic tradition" as well as to the responses to that tradition that have emerged from particular
            writers in particular contexts? It sounds to me like maybe the answer is yes
            and that the study of Sheridan or Inchbald is really best undertaken alongside
            a study of Burney's unperformed plays.
 Yes. Yes. Yes. This is another moment in which I realize I have wasted critical amounts of
                              energy and cunning trying to defend women against attacks
                              that they were unproduceable (Baillie, for example) or theatrically
                              illiterate. I love your ideas of reading these plays against
                              the produced ones that were deemed stageworthy. I've been
                              rereading Austen, and I was thinking last night about Marianne
                              in Sense and Sensibility, and how critical she is of one of the men who doesn't read well aloudshe complains that his ineptitude is enough to kill any romantic interest. It
                              got me thinking about productionwhat might it be like to stage one of these closet dramas on its own terms? Has
                              anyone done productions in the circumstances we imagine they
                              were produced in originally? I'll stop hereI have to run to a production of Hamleta student production, and it's absolutely packed, night after night. Something
                              keeps bringing them backElly
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            |  | Ellen Donkin and Thomas C. Crochunis Ellen Donkin is Professor of Theatre at Hampshire College. She is the author
                      of Upstaging Big Daddy (co-ed. with Susan Clement;U Michigan
                  P, 1993) and Getting into the Act: Women Playwrights in London
                  1776-1829 (Routledge, 1995). She is also co-editor (with Tracy
                  C. Davis) of Women and Playwriting in Nineteenth-Century Britain                  (Cambridge UP, 1999). She has published numerous essays on
                  women's theatre history.  Thomas C. Crochunis heads the publications department at the U.S. Department
                    of Education research laboratory at Brown University. He
                    is editing Joanna Baillie, Romantic
                  Dramatist: Critical Essays, a volume of essays on Baillie's
                  plays and dramaturgy (Gordon and Breach, forthcoming). In 1998,
                  he was guest editor of a special issue of Romanticism on the Net on British Women Playwrights around 1800. He is also
                  co-founder (with Michael Eberle-Sinatra) of the Web-based working
                  group on British Women Playwrights around 1800.  |  |  |  | 
 
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